Age/Gender: n/a, Male
Location: Argentina
Job: Student, music maker
I'm a guy with now 14 years, I just like to make music, my favorites instruments are Violin, Piano and flute. I live in Argentina and I like to see if I can play another songs in flute like "Numb - Linkin Park" (Yeah, it sounds crazy but I did =D).
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"Dude you gotta add something"
I mean, it's catchy but you should add some bg synths like idk... try with a good bass and... strings would help a lot =) try up with piano too, low but constant ^^.
it's been a while huh¿? check out my latest song =D
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"Well... i guess it's not my favorite kind of music"
but it's good dude =) the instruments you use keep it nice to hear, maybe work on some new drums ;) but it's good anyways =), 8.5
Author's Response:
Yeah, the drums do suck in a way, but I kinda like how it's softer than the original. :) It's basically mainstream ambient for the genre, so it's a bit different than your typical ambient I guess. Thanks for the listen though! Catch you around! :D
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Same as the person behind say, it hast pottential and you should add something else since a part :) keep going ^^
And it loops great =)=)
Author's Response:
Of course it has potential! It's cause I made the melody! :) Lol. Anyways, yes... I tend to change it up around the 50 second mark adding some new sounds, and working a new part from there. Glad you listened to it dude! :D
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Well I have listened to a lot of my songs with a laptop speaker and they sound bad (Well, they are bad, but they sound even worst).
I'm right now listening to it with not so good headphones but it sound good... I like it I just know what's to listen to a high quality synth with bad speakers haha.
Keep going that way =)
Author's Response:
Thanks for listening and liking! I'm glad you got around to hearing it, even if your headphones aren't the best. And don't worry about that guy, karma's a bitch.
Regards,
merlin
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The track's structure is weird because it's from "Surrealism", made by "4one"... and I really dont enjoy it too much, it's like you stealed the structure, the bass starts certainly at same time if I'm not wrong, and the drums arent that great, but anyways, I guess it's legal to use other song's structure, not so original, but legal, I give it a 7 because the intro was great, but the rest of the song isnt so good =/ and it's frustrating but well... keep working, I would recomend you to use the piano sample, but a totally different structure, the piano is a really good one I used it (But never finished the song).
Just try to start from empty at all.
Author's Response:
Okay, first of all, this track has nothing to do with Surrealism by 4one, the only thing I took from it, was its bass style and then I made my own EQing pretty much the same way these guys did, but thats it! The key of the song is totally different from Surrealism, the bass patterns are completely different, the structure? The structure of the song is entirely different, the only reason you are saying that is because the you think the bass enters at the same time as the one on Surrealism did, but then the whole structure changes after that!
Listen to the entire song before making ridiculous comments like this. Please.
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I think it's good... but there's just a problem I guess... it's a bit repeatitibe, I mean, if you wanna make it a loop... it doesnt mean if it variates a little before it repeats... I dont really know I never make good reviews, but I think you should change it a little the rythm... maybe a little variation in the middle... and you should also add some background instruments (Acording to the main one) so it's not alone with the drums, for example you have "Tune of the forest", it's old I know and not so great, but... you see there are 5 differents synths, there is a main one, but the rest is going on with it, just imagine it alone... it sounds better with the "Background" of instruments, right? =) Just add some synth not so loud as the first one... but dont let it be alone... maybe some strings =)=).
I hope I made a useful review >.< =) keep going on.
Author's Response:
Thanks for listening dude! I have to agree with you in some aspects of the song and disagree somewhat too. I agree that using a background noise that flows with the song does make a big difference when listening to a song because it makes it sound different throughout the song. But I have to disagree that it's overly repetitive. Reason being is because I'm gradually building up the song to it's full potential, then dropping it with another melody. I do notice that in your songs that you change the melody quickly throughout the songs, but sounds good that way. But some of the songs you have are relatively short... but sound excellent. For me, I'm hoping to make it a decent, long track. Definitely thanks for the tip though. I'll keep that in mind. :) And I'll see what I can do to incorporate that into this song somehow. :D
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This is good anyways =) I like how it goes on with the drums, you could use something like this (Shortest maybe) as an intro =)
Author's Response:
Haha, yes. The drums. :D Glad you listened. Definitely not a song for everyone considering the genre. But I'm glad you think it's good. :)
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1 word: That's just awesome O_O I love it ^^ I think it's just finished =P
Author's Response:
Lol, thanks man! Check out our other music too!
-Jason
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Awesome dude good job... I never liked a dance song lol this one is great so I like it ^^
Author's Response:
Why thank you!
DjTyph
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You've improved and I can see it... it's not so repeatitive and it also makes a crazy ambient lol =) the percusion part (If I'm saying the right word) is cool... I can't imagine the song without it... keep making music =D
Author's Response:
Yes, definitely an improvement for me. :D The percussion always seems to save my songs from becoming boring. I always use percussion, haha. I have another one in the making right now. It's my second song that'll be coming out sometime in the future. Haven't worked on it as much of late, but it's getting done. Thanks for the review too dude! I'm gonna go back to your songs and check them out... even the older ones. :P
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